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one day you'll unfold 
your bedsheets, and i will still 
be in the creases. 
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carmennge Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love the imagery... you write the most evocative haikus, Vicky! Clap 
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Writer
haha thank you! & Vicky? O.o
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carmennge Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry I mistakenly wrote Vicky instead of Phyllis! Please forgive me :( (Sad) 
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shep4life Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thats great
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student Writer
c: thanks
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shep4life Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course!
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kissysaltcoatedangel Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Woah, just woah! :heart: I love it. 
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student Writer
thank you :heart:
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kissysaltcoatedangel Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No prob! :) 
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TheMoltenDragon Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love how simple this is even though there is a lot of meaning
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student Writer
thanks :)
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MisterTotality Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
Once you've become accustomed to sleeping with someone else, yes, it is like this in a way.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student Writer
yes, exactly 
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