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i don't know when it started,
but for years now
i've been filling my lungs
with salt water.

funny,
because i've never seen the 
sea, but yet
i find my fingers aching for it 
all the same.

somewhere between cyanosis and delirium, 
my thoughts have migrated;
i am no longer
just another semi-promise against a lover's back.

(i am more that that
and you know it.)



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:icontoxic-nebulae:
toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Student Writer
come and open up your folding chair next to meee
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Student Writer
u gh THIS SONG
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Is-lnds Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
what a perfect title.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Student Writer
thank you :)
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Is-lnds Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013
;)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Incredible. The title actually reminds me of my piece, "Oceanic Skies."
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you :) :D & cool!
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:iconchromeantennae:
chromeantennae Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

My pleasure!

:nod:

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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013   Writer
I really adore the title.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Student Writer
thank you- it's actually a line in a Regina Spektor song :) 
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