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they say that 
opposites attract, 
but that's not really true;
we both hate our misery 
and i'm learning to
 love you.

but you know what they say
about writers;
they'll suck you dry
and only use you
to write about. carve your name
into poems (not into
skin-- that's not "in" right now,
i guess), but
maybe i'm all out of words
and you
are all i want to read about.
////what///
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:iconjackiedarartist:
JackieDarArtist Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist
makes me remember judgment and love for other things can also hurt
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013   Writer
I love the honest sentiment and the realism. This is very good indeed. Thankyou.

Regards,
John.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Student Writer
:heart: thank you for all the feedback. it means a lot.
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AbbyMeyer Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
Wonderful. <3
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Student Writer
thank you. :heart:
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
:nod:
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whitetrashnose Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
I'll do the carving
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FScrossTezin Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful darling.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Writer
thank you!
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FScrossTezin Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh, I love this.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Writer
:heart:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Student Writer
Wow! This is amazing. :heart:
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Writer
thank you! :D
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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CherishKay Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant!
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Writer
thank you!
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CherishKay Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't even know what to say about this. You've said so much with so little here. Congratulations on the DLD, this most definitely deserves it.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Writer
thank you so much!! ahh i'm screaming!!
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here. Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Writer
OH MY GOSH THANK YOU

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AdrianMinotaur Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What can I say but, strikingly beautiful poem...Heart  I could also say, that I like how you portray writers, bitter, but sweet with words. :) 
What does t. mean? If my questions not to intrusive
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Writer
thank you! & its the first initial of a boy. :)
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ahhh gosh i love this <3
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Writer
thank you!
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Tevo77777 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student Writer
I never wrote about anyone I knew directly but.....I like this poem
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