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i am done writing about
blood. 

you can find me
in the "new beginnings" 
isle, splashed with scar tissue and 
pale skin--

i am

whole. 


dear child, open your
eyes: 
there are stars, a galaxy, and
there is breath in your lungs. 
the past is never
forgotten, but 
you have lived through it,
swam through it and
maybe died a little 
through it, but you
came out on top. 

when this winter ends, it
will end harshly;
but spring comes every year,
and i hope that you
remember that;

i hope you open your eyes
to rain and i hope
that you fall in love with 
it, and i hope
that you let life move
like i had to. 

i read all of the feedback messages, i just can't respond. i don't know why. i read them and i realize that it would take so long to reply to them, and i get all flustered. but i read them. and thank you all. 
i also read through a lot of the work from the people i watch, and i am constantly amazed at how amazing it all is. 


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:iconglitter-and-acid:
glitter-and-acid Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
simple and beautiful
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :heart: 
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yo1000 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
very nice
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :heart: 
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:iconsevgiozp:
SevgiOzp Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
Oh, this piece had me at hello...brilliant!
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :heart: 
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HawthornSword Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is lovely, and I can really relate. :)
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :heart: 
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BlackBowfin Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Effin greatness.
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :heart: 
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