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the back roads--
80's music. 

a water bottle full of
god knows what,
and it burns a little going down.
that's okay. we all need that,
don't we? 
the sting. 

we touched a windmill. 
and we leaned against it,
pointing at radio towers
with cheap cigarettes dangling between our lips
before we kissed,
sober, this time
(sort of).

stars screamed at us.
this is why
you like the country.
i wondered about our smoke 
creating the stars
as it drifts out of our lungs
in clouds of post-code envy
(god, we need to get away from here). 

that would take a long time.

        that's okay. we've got time.


had a good night okay
I TOUCHED A WINDMILL
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Phoenixs-Designs Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student General Artist
I really liked it. For a minute, I thought it said "torched" instead of "touched" and I'm like... O.o.... what? That sounds like an interesting night...
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Writer
haha that would have gone down a different path! & thank you!
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is fabulous. I feel like I'm right there with you.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Writer
thank you :D
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ssensory Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Student Writer
This is too amazing. Can I, like, marry this piece? 

:heart: 

or creepily make a shrine to it in my closet like helga from that one kid's show or is that going too far :stare:
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Student Writer
wow thank you so much :heart: 
& that bottom comment made my life okay 
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ssensory Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Student Writer
you're most welcome! :hug: 
hahaha, I'm glad. :la:
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