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she was always a
galaxy, and i am not 
allowed to touch stars. 

to ellie- because i could never be more.
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Silent--Songbird Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful
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chasingxaimee Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student Writer
Perfect. :)
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student Writer
:heart:
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Like1guy Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Going through this right now
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Writer
i wish you much luck. :heart:
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delirious-eyes Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful; for something so short it has a lot of punch.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student Writer
thank you. :heart:
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NicholasFigureArt Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
There's a lot of truth in these spare words -- the unspoken theme of many a lifetime. But to think you have it and then to lose?
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Writer
thank you. & that happens more times then i can count.
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NicholasFigureArt Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
Well, here's wishing that you find that true, clear love. Keep up the great work.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Writer
thank you so much :heart:
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EmoOtakuTDCT Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So much in just a few words.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student Writer
:heart:
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013   Writer
Beautiful. :heart:
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Student Writer
thank you. :heart:
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013   Writer
My pleasure. :heart:
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013   Writer
A genuine poem concerning a genuine feeling. You can't really get better than that.

Regards,
John.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Student Writer
thank you. c:
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013   Writer
You're welcome.
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Morpheus1035 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is probably one of my all-time favorite poems.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Student Writer
yay! thank you :heart:
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De7h1nK13 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
is there an option above fav? no? damn

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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student Writer
:heart:
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AdrianMinotaur Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know this feeling well, probably had the most enlightening, and tender experience before; With my best friend, but he pulled back and I couldn't follow. It sucks, really sucksHeartbreaker!  If you can try for the stars, if you fall back down to earth, at least you had the experience. And if you can't, well I'm sure a beautiful soul like yours will attract another as luminous! :):butterfly: (Butterfly)  
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Student Writer
that's sad :L but like you said, at least you experienced it!
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Nana--Karate5 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
I know this feeling all to well. Beautiful writing by the way
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Student Writer
thank you. :hug:
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Nana--Karate5 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
Your welcome ^^
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AnarchyWriter Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Out of curiosity, what's the meaning behind this haiku? I'm just curious about it.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student Writer
the feeling of wanting to be with someone but knowing that for whatever reason, you cannot. in this case, it's wanting to be with a girl but not being sure if it's okay or not.
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AnarchyWriter Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Is it based upon a personal experience?
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student Writer
yes.
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AnarchyWriter Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Alright sorry for being so intrusive.

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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student Writer
it's all good in this hood :)
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AnarchyWriter Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cool.
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SparrowStew Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
That is a good one, though sort of depressing.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Student Writer
thank you. & haha, i guess it kinda is.
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thegirlfromindonesia Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
Love it - so short but beautiful, yet sad too.
:)
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Student Writer
thank you :heart:
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thegirlfromindonesia Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
You're welcome (:
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Phaneres Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Simple and really good.
Great job :)
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Student Writer
thank you!
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letheopiate Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
I love it. It's beautiful. Love 
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Writer
thank you!
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AdamDellow Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
:)
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Writer
:D
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chewyraezen Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
poignant. :hug:
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Student Writer
:heart:
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chewyraezen Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: :iconbigheartplz:
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