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i keep Chinese fortunes 
and your hope
folded up in my pocket,
staying warm
hand-in-hand with the worst things
about me.
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this is beautiful.
and i don't know why but capitalizing chinese with everything else lowercase just... i don't know.
this is perfect.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Writer
thank you so so much :heart:
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PuppetMaster1965 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ohmygosh!
I love this so so much!
I really like the line 'staying warm'
because although it is short I think it has the most meaning in the piece!
as if you were keeping it warm hoping they would come back
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Writer
thank you so much! :D & i like that interpretation. 
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PuppetMaster1965 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your very welcome!
and if you don't mind...
what exactly were you writing about?
was it a literal dinner or...
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Writer
no, it was what you said- wanting someone to stay/come back
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PuppetMaster1965 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh k! thought so but wanted to be sure!
it's a really original take on it
(and thanks for the watch!)
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Writer
thank you as well!
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PuppetMaster1965 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
uh huh! Kawaii La 
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