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it still feels like summer.
the rain 
tastes like late nights and cigarettes,
sliding through the back door,
still damp with the could-have-beens,
our past lovers
tugging at our lips. 

we sit in downpour
and watch the trains roll past,
metallic stardust 
spilling from our mouths
while we talk about 
how we could get on one of those trains
and just get off 
at the last stop.

"and we'd never come home." 
i had a really good night.
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Lyrica-Lee Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

Incredible work! Makes me feel like I couldve been there, sitting, smoking, in the rain, talking. This whole piece just speaks to my soul.

 

Beatutifully done.

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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student Writer
thank you! :)
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LoveIs4Me Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The imagery here is incredible. i adore reading this, over and over, because of the amazing pictures and ideas it conjures up. I am running out of positive adjectives, but really, just spectacular.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Student Writer
thank you :heart:
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half-pixieman Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student Writer
So much nostalgic imagery I love this sooo much
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student Writer
:heart: :heart: 
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I honestly favorited this for the last line. It brings it all together so wonderfully. I also really love "the rain tastes like late nights and cigarettes."
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student Writer
thank you so much, always :heart:
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Writer
thank you!
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