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i. 
our lips were chapped. it
was February and we
were so very young.

ii.
this was the first year
i died my hair black. we were 
only half in love.

iii.
it is heartbreaking,
because i can't remember 
where you kissed me first.

iiii.
you tasted like heat,
it was summer. i was
hardly just fifteen. 

iiiii.
with your tongue shoved down
my throat, you told me sex was
nothing to be feared.

iiiii.i 
part of me wanted 
you to be my last breath; the
last thing i saw bloom.
James, Nick, Mitch, Joe, Griffin, Blaize. 
I just realized that the names got weirder and weirder...
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LoveIs4Me Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love haiku's and just started my haiku diary, so this inspires me like mad.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student Writer
thank you! wow good luck :)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't have words for this, I love it so much.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Student Writer
thank yyou :)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure. :)
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barbzzp Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Student Writer
beautiful..the last line was staggering.  :)
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Student Writer
thank you! :D
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barbzzp Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Student Writer
you're welcome Heart 
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Professional Writer
An emotional series of Senryu. They were all open and strong, and they translate well. I couldn't pick a favourite - they are all amazing. Thankyou for sharing these with us.

Regards,
John.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Student Writer
thank you so much. :rose:
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