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isn't it a great chance,
us taking it all and
running with the colors;

our skin windy and
our thoughts dry, 
me wanting to kiss you and you
wanted to seize the
stars. 
we are nothing more
than our desires
in the end; i will be
locked between dusty pages
and you 
will be tossing stones with
Apollo. 

we live inside a metaphor.
the way your skin felt
in July 
stand for so much more
than a passing of 
molecules. 
i feel like my writing/interaction has been slacking and i'm sorry i just had a butt ton of homework/ hours at work. 
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:iconhaphazardmelody:
haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
our skin windy :heart:
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Professional Writer
You write so beautifully....
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :heart:
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Professional Writer
You are welcome.
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Darkness-and-Rage Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
your delay only sweetens your words Solis, beautiful.

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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
:heart:
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abrizelle Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"in the end; i will be
locked between dusty pages
and you 
will be tossing stones with
Apollo. "

Absolutely beautiful.. breathtaking really. I love this piece. 
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
thank you so much :heart:
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:iconabrizelle:
abrizelle Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
you're very welcome c:
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is excellent
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