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picking daisies 
from her
wrists, she turns to me
with drug store
eyes and she
drops her heart at my
feet. 

"it was a
no winner from the
beginning," she says,
and she is right--

and so i leave her
with her garden of eve
and a pocket full
of war stories; in the 
rising sun, she tells me
that i no longer look like
Apollo, and i smile,

pick up my 
half hearted
skeleton, my ragged bones and
my tired veins, and 
i leave her standing
in the
doorframe-- i
find a new
home.
goodnight i am pooped
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learningtobefree Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student Writer
this entire thing is golden except: 

 i tell her i 
hate her, just to watch her
crumble, and then i 
am gone. 

that's too cliche for the rest of this wonder. 

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XBrokenRiversX Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is wonderful and so powerful
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Darkness-and-Rage Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
brutal solis but still beautiful. xx
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