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i.

if i were to
capture the sky, put it
in a box and 
mail it to you,
i wonder if you would smile. 

ii. 

it's always too cold
in my room. the wood 
bites my soles
and the windows clog my
soul. 

iii.

this winter, i began
to ache for something
i never knew i wanted. 
my skin grew
dry and elastic, and
i imagined you kissing me
underneath a willow tree. 

iiii.

my best friend is
fucking up, and i
am watching. it's all
that i can do, and
i can't help but wish
that he would straighten out,
because i want him in my life.
not just now: i mean
10 years from now. 

iiiii.

i think that everyone 
i once loved
hates me. i can only pray
that you don't turn out the
same way.
a poem about my life (that makes no sense)
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I almost think that I wrote this because of how much it applies to me. 
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student Writer
haahha! i feel 
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah. 
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:iconshep4life:
shep4life Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
it's always too cold
in my room. the wood 
bites my soles
and the windows clog my
soul. 

Im sorry for what you're going through...your poems are raw
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student Writer
it's alright & thank you
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:iconshep4life:
shep4life Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Professional Writer
Indeed a powerful poem. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
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:iconsolis-ortus:
solis-ortus Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :)
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Professional Writer
:)
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:iconsecke:
Secke Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Writer
Just realized my wording was a bit off on that comment, sorry.  But this poem is beautiful.
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