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there is no amount 
of smoke
that can keep you
out of my thoughts. 

to see you
is to see stars, 
and i'm dizzy enough
with the image of you
right before dawn 
stuck in my head,
but i want more.

i have the instinctive need
to run a finger down your
neck, to memorize
how you look when you
smile, just so that i can
write about you,
to make you realize
how spectacular you are.


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Roshiray Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
this is simply amazing...what a way with words you have..Heart +fav 
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Student Writer
thank you! :love:
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Darkness-and-Rage Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
imagery is good, I can feel the emotion behind it and it is very moving, you once again hit a nerve Solis, you need to stop doing that to me ;-) its getting strange. incredible work my dear, i would expect no less.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student Writer
hehe thank you! :) 
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Professional Writer
A sincere and impassioned poem. A great read. Thankyou.

Regards,
John.
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :)
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Professional Writer
:)
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :D
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problem
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